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Created Mon Oct 12 2020

I.
A gate was risen around
 
a garden of roses
 
petals adorned by thorns
 
A rather lovely warning
 
to the darkness
 
creeping in with greed
 
A misunderstanding
 
is what this gate feeds
 
Shadows are that of the
 
admirers of the roses
 
And with a single strike
 
the gate falls
 
II.
A gate was risen around
 
a garden of roses
 
petals adorned by thorns
 
A rather lovely warning
 
to the darkness
 
creeping in with greed
 
 
A misunderstanding
 
is what this gate feeds
 
Shadows are that of the
 
admirers of the roses
 
And with a single strike
 
the gate falls
 
insert rising motion
omit roses, insert fluid body movements
 
insert sharp wrist movements
 
 
 
 
omit feeding, insert representation of an idea
 
omit admirers, insert surrounding
insert pushing forward
 
 
III.
A gate
roses
 
petals adorned by thorns
 
A warning
 
to the darkness
 
creeping in with greed
 
 
A misunderstanding
 
feeds
 
Shadows are that of the
 
admirers
a single strike
 
the gate falls
 
IV.
A gate
roses
 
petals adorned by thorns
 
A warning
 
to the darkness
 
creeping in with greed
 
A misunderstanding
 
feeds
 
Shadows are that of the
 
admirers
a single strike
 
the gate falls
 
 
 
omit thorns, insert distance between dancers
 
 
insert slow, ominous approach
 
 
 
omit shadows, insert towering figures
 
 
 
 
V.
A gate
roses
thorns
A warning
to the darkness
greed
 
A misunderstanding
feeds
Shadows
admirers
a single strike
the gate falls

Author

Moira Z Instagram: @moiraisfabulous
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