Strikethrough Score #11

Strikethrough #11

I.

expedite

the

speed

of

this

room

crossing

to

peak

by

ceiling

to

reach

the

curtain

cables

that

lifted

for

you

and

lowered

for

the

next

you

a

practiced

spectacle

to

be

in

awe

of

the

thing

that

soon

reflects

in

hungry

sitting

eyes

to

despise

the

looking

that

makes

you

II.

expedite

the

speed

of

this

room

crossing

to

peak

by

ceiling

to

reach

the

curtain

cables

that

lifted

for

you

and

lowered

for

the

next

you

a

practiced

spectacle

to

be

in

awe

of

the

thing

that

soon

reflects

in

hungry

sitting

eyes

to

despise

the

looking

that

makes

you

omit railway

insert long time frame

omit height shift

omit hand-over-hand reach

insert a collapsible fit

insert raised skeleton

insert "me"

insert improvisation

insert stargaze

omit the coming seconds

insert closed eyes

omit creation of doubt

III.

expedite

this

room

crossing

that

lifted

you

for

the

next

spectacle

that

reflects

in

looking

IV.

expedite

this

room

crossing

that

lifted

you

for

the

next

spectacle

that

reflects

in

looking

omit previous movement

omit crisscross

omit "Act II"

insert shiny fabric

omit acknowledgement

omit applause

V.

this

room

that

lifted

you

that

reflects

Author

Maxine Flasher-Düzgüneş •Instagram: @poeticabythebay

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